我怀想着故乡的雷声和雨声。那隆隆的有力的搏击,从山谷返响到山谷,仿佛春之芽就从冻土里震动,惊醒,而怒茁出来。细草样柔的雨声又以温存之手抚摩它,使它簇生油绿

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问题    我怀想着故乡的雷声和雨声。那隆隆的有力的搏击,从山谷返响到山谷,仿佛春之芽就从冻土里震动,惊醒,而怒茁出来。细草样柔的雨声又以温存之手抚摩它,使它簇生油绿的枝叶而开出红色的花。这些怀想如乡愁一样萦绕得使我忧郁了。我心里的气候也和这北方大陆一样缺少雨量,一滴温柔的泪在我枯涩的眼里,如迟疑在这阴沉的天空里的雨点,久不落下。

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答案    I can never forget the thunderstorm we often had in my hometown. Over there, whenever the rumble of thunder reverberated across the valley, the buds of spring would seem to sprout freely after being disturbed and roused up from their slumber in the frozen soil. Then tenderly stroked by the soft hands of fine rain, they would put forth bright green leaves and pink flowers. It makes me nostalgic and melancholy to think about old times and my mind is as depressed as the vast expanse of North China is thirsty. A tear stands in my dull eye and, like the rain lingering in the murky sky, is slow to roll down.

解析    本段材料选自现代诗人、散文家、文学评论家何其芳的散文《雨前》。作者通过对雨前自然景物和人物心态的描写,渲染出一种久旱逢甘霖的强烈气氛。文章托物言志,借景抒怀,流露出作者不满黑暗现实、渴望光明的心态。翻译时宜用现在时态,增强描述的生动性和现实感。
1.第一句比较简单,但是要注意“故乡的雷声和雨声”是指“故乡经常会有的雷雨天气”的意思,因此译为the thunderstorm we often had in my hometown。
2.第二句,“那隆隆的有力的搏击”,省略了定语,完整形式是“那隆隆的有力的(雷的)搏击”,翻译成英文时要添加进去,译为the rumble of thunder。“从山谷返响到山谷”译为reverberated across the valley。几个连续动作“从冻土里震动,惊醒,而怒茁出来”译为sprout freely after being disturbed and roused up from their slumber in the frozen soil。
3.第三句翻译时注意要译出拟人的感情色彩。“细草样柔的雨声又以温存之手抚摩它”译为tenderly stroked by the soft hands of fine rain,为了下文翻译的需要,此处变换了主语的位置。“簇生油绿的枝叶而开出红色的花”译为put forth bright green leaves and pink flowers。
4.在最后一句中,“一滴温柔的泪在我枯涩的眼里,如迟疑在这阴沉的天空里的雨点,久不落下”译为“A tear stands in my dull eye and,like the rain lingering in the murky sky,is slow to roll down.”。
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