Write a note of about 50—60 words based on the following situation:You are Pet

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问题  Write a note of about 50—60 words based on the following situation:
You are Peter/Mary.  You had a party at your home recently, but you unintentionally neglected to invite a close friend of yours — Victoria. Write her a note apologizing for this and explaining how the mistake came about. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy.

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答案                                                                                          Nov. 7
Dear Victoria,
    This note is meant to be a token of my apology to you for having not invited you to a party held at my home last Sunday.  It all happened quite by accident.  Before the party, I scribbled a list of names and I clearly remember you were on the list.  Then I asked my sister to call all of you one by one.  Unfortunately, she misread your name and dialled a different friend of mine whose name happened to be spelt quite like yours.  Finally, the same number of guests came and I was so careless that I didn’t realize a mistake had occurred. I wish you, my closest friend, would forgive me.
    Best of all,
                                                                     Yours,
                                                                      Peter

解析 1.写50—60词左右。时间为10分钟。
2.内容是你向好朋友Victoria道歉,原因是你上次在家里搞聚会时无意中忘了请她参加,需要解释这一意外是如何发生的。整个便条读起来要有头有尾,让读者知道事情的来龙去脉。细节不可弄错(如作者本人署名时应为Peter或Mary)。
3.交流双方为朋友关系,语体色彩为非正式,语言表达上要较口语化,并带感情色彩。
4.便条写作有一定的内容及格式要求,这是评分要点。
[写作指南]
1.先交待写便条时间;
2.接着写称呼;
3.对上次在家里搞聚会时无意中忘了请Victoria参加表示道歉,并解释事情发生的具体情况,同时希望对方原谅自己;
4.客套话;
5.致敬、签名。
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