Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a note of about 50 — 60 words based on the following s

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问题 Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a note of about 50 — 60 words based on the following situation:
    Your friend, Jane, has failed in the final exam, and is feeling very unhappy about it.
    Write a note to comfort her and give her some encouragement.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.

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答案 Dear Jane,
  I’m sorry to 1earn about your poor luck in the final exam.Well,you really don’t have to feel too sad about it.You know,this is just the kind of thing that often happens to us students.it doesn’t mean we are failures.Trust yourself as I do.I’m sure you will be a big success next time.Cheer up,Jane.Let’s do some window shopping tomorrow afternoon,shall we? Look forward to your call.
                                                   Yours,
                                                    Lee

解析 [写作要点]
1.写50—60词。时间为10分钟。
2.写作内容:你朋友Jane因为期末考试未通过而感到非常难过。为了安慰她,你写此短信以给予鼓励。
3.当提及对方心情不愉快的原因时最好间接、委婉,不必重提对方期末考试不及格。同时,不忘给予必要的鼓励。
4.便条写作有一定内容及格式要求,这是评分要点。
[思路指南]
1.先交待写便条时间;
2.接着写称呼;
3.首先对对方在期末考试中的坏运气表示难过,然后说明学生都有可能遇到这种不如意的情况。劝对方振作精神,不妨和我一起出来放松放松,如逛街。劝对方相信自己,下次一定会取得好成绩的。
4.客套话;
5.致敬、签名
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