Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:Every college stu

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问题 Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:
Every college student would agree that life in college is not the same as it was in the middle school. Now, you have been asked by the Students’ Union to write a passage entitled
       THE MAIN DIFFERENCE BETWEEN MY COLLEGE LIFE AND MY MIDDLE SCHOOL LIFE
as part of an introduction programme for new students coming in September.
You are to write in three paragraphs.
In the first paragraph, state clearly what you think the main difference is between college and middle school life.
In the second paragraph, state which life you prefer and why.
In the last paragraph, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion with a summary or suggestion.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案       The Main Difference Between My College Life and My Middle School Life
    As every college student would agree, life in college is not the same as it was in the  middle  school.   In  my  eyes,  the  main  difference  lies  in  the  degree  of independence.
     In college, I enjoy a great degree of independence.  I live on my own: wash my own clothes, buy my own food, look after myself.  I make my daily decisions of my own will.  What is more, I depend heavily on myself in my study.  I have plenty of free time outside the class.  In order to succeed, I need to gain as much from the teachers’ lectures as from my self-study.  In the absence of pressure form both the college and the family, I must have a workable plan of my own.  In contrast, I lived a dependent life in the middle school.  My parents were responsible for my daily life so that I did not have to worry about food, clothing and the like. Nor did I have to plan much for my study. My teachers had almost everything in store for me. What I needed to do was to swallow it in and digest it.  The harder I worked under the teachers’ instruction, the greater my progress.  By comparison, I would say I love the independent life now. After all, I am already an adult.
     To sum up, I live a quite different life in college from that in my middle school in that I am much more responsible for my own life and study. To those newcomers, I would suggest they break away from their parents’ tender care and stand on their own feet.

解析 1.写三段,字数150字左右。  时间35分钟。
2.第一段:明确表述自己的看法。  第二段:指出自己更喜爱哪一种生活,并说明为什么。  第三段:简要总结前面的讨论,或提出建议。
3.文体为议论文,谈自己的观点。
4.写作者的身份是在校大学生,应校学生会之约写此文章,目的是给9月份入学的新生介绍大学生活与中学生活之差别。
[写作提纲]
第1段:先引出话题(每个大学生都认为中学生活与大学生活不一样),再提出自己的看法(如认为二者的一个主要差别在于学生的独立程度不同)。
第2段:分别讨论中学生活和大学生活在独立性方面的差别,然后指出自己更喜爱大学生活,因为自己更希望独立。
第3段:(用不同的语言表达方式)重申自己的观点,总结上面的讨论,并适当引申(如希望新生入学后能注重培养自己的独立性)。
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