People nowadays are facing more and more pressure in life and hence they are

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问题     People nowadays are facing more and more pressure in life and hence they are more likely to do something they like in their spare time. They believe that hobby is a way to enjoy life and relax themselves. What is your opinion about hobbies? Write a composition in NO LESS TIHAN 200 words on the following topic:
    The Importance of Having Hobbies
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
    In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案     The Importance of Having Hobbies
    It is said that we can know someone by the company he keeps. Similarly, I would say that we can know someone by the hobbies he pursues. Hobbies are actually quite important for those who deal with a lot of pressure at work and in life.
    First of all, hobbies provide us with an option to get "distracted" from the tension at work. For instance, some senior executives take some time to play golf or do other sports, even though they have a full schedule, because hobbies can carry them away from the deadlock in business. Hobbies can relax their mind and recharge them to fight the next battle. Secondly, hobbies reward us with a variety of knowledge. Some people love collecting stamps and they learn a lot about the festivals and historical events. Some people take gardening as a hobby and they acquire basic information about different kinds of plants. It is fair to say that hobbies are opening doors for us, through which we can go into a diverse and colorful world.
    In conclusion, having hobbies helps us take a "time-out" from work and gain a wealth of knowledge. It is never too late to take up a new hobby.

解析     本题属于“给定观点型”作文,涉及的题材是“健康生活”。该题要求考生对“爱好的重要性”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    第一段:从察其友、知其人的名言人题,指出爱好对于在工作和生活上压力大的人很重要。
    第二段:阐述原因。第一,爱好能给我们一个逃离工作压力的机会;第二,爱好能带给我们各种知识,举集邮和园艺为例。
    第三段:重申观点——爱好能让我们从工作中得到休息,能带给我们丰富的知识。
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