1. 近年来越来越多的公共场所禁烟 2.这项举措在受到拥护的同时也引发了争议 3.你的看法 Should Sm

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问题     1. 近年来越来越多的公共场所禁烟
    2.这项举措在受到拥护的同时也引发了争议
    3.你的看法

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答案               Should Smoking Be Banned in Public Places?
[1] In recent years,smoking has been banned in many public places such as shops,restaurants,and even bus stops.[2] This regulation has triggered much dispute.
[3] On the one hand,many welcome the ban since lots of illnesses and deaths are smoking-related, and this is a very sensible step to improve people’s health and living condition.[4] On the other hand, however,smokers consider it is unfair to ban smoking.
[5] It is their right to smoke,and they are not com-mitting any crime,so the government should not ban that.
[6] In my view,to ban smoking is a long term process,during which education rather than enforcement is more likely to be the key to the success.
[7] Banning smoking in the public areas is a policy that should be implemented step by step.

解析 [1]提出现象,对应提纲中的第1点。
[2]这是一个承上启下的句子,由dispute(争论;辩论)引出下文的两方观点。trigger是亮点词,比cause,bring要生动活泼些,后常跟problem,debate,dispute等。
[3][4]进入提纲第2点,用On the one hand-On the other hand…分别阐述“拥护”和“争议”。smoking related“与吸烟有关的”,作表语,表达简洁。
[5]commit crime“犯罪”,表达准确。
[6]用In my view提出自己的观点。这一句是全文最漂亮的句子,上文多是用简单的短句,这一句用了地道的非限制性定语从句.并灵活运用rather than, be more likely to以及be the key to sth.这些语言点,非常地道。
[7]implement是亮点词汇,表示“实施;执行”。step by step“一步一步地”。
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