Read carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS

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问题    Read carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:
   - summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then
   - comment on whether delayed employment is a good thing.
   You can support yourself with information from the excerpt.
   Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
               Some Graduates Decide to Delay Job Search
   With the job market becoming increasingly competitive every year, a growing number of fresh university graduates are opting for " delayed employment".
   According to a survey released by online recruiter Zhaopin on Tuesday, about 9.8 percent of the 93,420 graduates who participated in a written survey said they would not begin working right after graduation.
   Job consultants at Zhaopin explained that there are more choices for young people born after 1995. Jobs related to personal interests have greater attraction, and they are not willing to give in and take a job they don’t like.
   At the same time, they are also aware of the tension in the job market, and some have opted to delay job hunting to avoid the competition.
   According to Beijing-based education consultancy MyCos, the number of students who have opted for delayed employment—or not starting their career in six months’ time—has been growing steadily since 2011.
   " Delayed employment is not that intimidating. Chinese university students have learned a lot from books but lack practice. Most of the graduates choosing to delay employment are hoping to increase their social experience," said Guo Sheng, chief executive officer of Zhaopin.
   "Some young people who are not faced with a heavy economic burden are simply staying at home, relying on parents. But in general, the majority of university graduates are willing to get a job and work toward their goals. They just want to know more about the World first," he said.

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答案                      My View on Delayed Employment
   Confronted with the fierce competition in the job market in recent years, more and more university graduates choose to postpone their employment. Some students would not begin working because they are not willing to take a job they don’t like. Other students, however, have opted to delay job hunting just because they want to avoid the competition. From my point of view, delayed employment should be analyzed from different perspectives.
   To begin with, for those who aspire to see clearly the road ahead before stepping on ii, delayed employment is a wise option. During this period of free time, university graduates can either do some research about the job market or enrich themselves by travelling or doing volunteer jobs. These experiences can in turn give them an insight into the society they are going to enter. However, for those idlers who only want to rely on their parents for a living, more avenues of employment for spurring them to be self-reliant should be opened up. As in this case, delayed employment is nothing but a waste of time. On the one hand, parents should stop pampering their children in case they become good-for-nothings. On the other hand, moral lessons should be propagated to teach these idle people that being a loafer is something that they should be ashamed of.
   All in all, delayed employment among university students can be either a useful springboard for a higher career ladder or a meaningless phase to loaf away the time. One has to consider his own circumstances upon this issue.

解析    本题要求讨论以下现象:随着就业市场的竞争越来越激烈,很多大学毕业生选择推迟就业。针对这一现象是好是坏引发了热议。在具体行文方面,考生可以在第一段简单概述所给材料的内容;第二段提出自己的观点并展开论述,论证有理有据即可;第三段再次强调自己的观点,总结全文。
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