For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: E

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Emotion Quotient(EQ) Matters More Than Intelligence Quotient(IQ). You should write no less than 120 words, and your composition should be based on the following information:
在我国,过去这些年来,人们一直看重智商。其实,在现实生活中,高情商比高智商更重要。Emotion Quotient(EQ) Matters More Than Intelligence Quotient(IQ)

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答案             Emotion Quotient (FQ) Matters More Than Intelligence Quotient (IQ)
    As we know, Intelligence Quotient (IQ) is thought to be the most important aspect to evaluate a person all the time. A person with high IQ has usually been regarded as a success. That is to say, much more importance is attached to IQ in the past decade years. Of course, IQ is necessary and helpful for a person to do well in the work.
    But as a matter of fact, in my opinion, higher EQ matters mom than higher IQ, especially in such a rapidly developing society. On one hand, in realistic life, not only do we need to exhibit our own knowledge but also we need to have the abilities to cooperate with others. Because humans are social men, we have to be interrelated and interact on each other all the time. On the other hand, a mountain of facts have demonstrated the importance of EQ either in the work, in the studies, or in the lives. For example, a person with high IQ but low EQ may lack respect and ability to communicate with others in an effective way, thus, he or she may not be welcome. While a person with high EQ, though not so clever, he or she may be welcome.
    In a word, EQ plays a more important role in our daily life. To be successful, we should foster our EQ along with improving the IQ.

解析     本文是一篇根据情景提示展开的议论文。本文针对题目指令中的情景提示,围绕在现实生活中,高情商比高智商更重要这个中心展开。作者首先指出在我国过去这些年来人们一直看重智商,谁的智商高谁就被认为是个成功者。接着,作者用but提出在现实生活中高情商比高智商更重要的观点。一方面我们人类是属于社会人,除了展示自己的知识才能外,更需要有与他人交往相处的能力,因为我们总是要与别人相互联系相互影响;另一方面,现实生活中有大量的事实证明这一点:一个高智商低情商的人由于缺乏与他人友好相处的能力而不受人欢迎,而一个高情商的人,也许不是非常聪明,但却受人欢迎。所以要想获得成功,就要在提高知识的同时注重对情商的培养。
    本文观点明确,层次分明,一些连接词组用得恰到好处,如:as we know, that is to say, but as a matter of fact, on ode hand, on the other hand, a mountain of, thus, while, in a word等,使全文语言通顺流畅。
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