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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topi
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topi
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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic On Over-packing. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 目前许多商品都存在包装过度的现象
2. 这种现象会带来什么影响
3. 我的看法
On Over-packing
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On Over-packing
(1) Nowadays,many manufacturers pay much attention to packaging of products so that their commodities can attract customers.
(2) Over-packing, however, leads to many problems. (3) Firstly, important materials for industrial production and daily life have been lavishly consumed by the packing industry. (3)Secondly, over-packaging also generates a lot of garbage, (4) most of which is not degradable. (5) It is reported that 20 percent of our annual garbage comes from excessive wrapping. (3) Thirdly, over-packing has also (6) result in an unhealthy consumption habit and become a cover-up for some businessmen to gain staggering profits, (7) as wrapping sometimes takes up 70 percent of the total cost of a commodity.
(8) To my mind, (9) it’s the quality rather than the gaudy looks of the commodity from which the customers really benefit. (10) Therefore, manufacturers should not over-pack but ensure the quality of the products in order to gain profits in the long run.
解析
(1) 引出现象。
(2) 本句为转折,承上启下。lead to意为“导致”。
(3) Firstly...Secondly...Thirdly...分层陈述过度包装带来的问题。
(4) 非限制性定语从句。
(5) 引用具体数据,使论证更加有力。
(6) result in同lead to,意为“导致”。
(7) 再次引用数据来论证。
(8) to my mind“在我看来”,类似的表达还有in my opinion,in my view, as far as I’m concerned等。
(9) 本句是本文的经典句,是一个含有定语从句的强调句。rather than“而不是”。
(10) not...but...“不是…而是…”。
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