For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Col

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On College Students’ Renting Houses Outside Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1. 眼下大学生在外租房居住的现象十分普遍
    2. 对比分析在外租房居住和住在学校宿舍的利弊
    3. 我的看法

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答案              On College Students’ Renting Houses Outside Campus
[1] According to a recent survey, about 20 percent of college students now live in houses they rent outside campus and some students plan to join them. In these small kingdoms,
[2] they say, they can enjoy more freedom than on campus.
[3] It is undeniable that many dormitories are
[4] far from satisfactory because they are small, shabby, noisy, stuffy in summer and cold in winter. However,
[5] the merits of living on campus outweigh its demerits. By sharing a room with others, one learns how to understand and help each other. Through daily communication with roommates, one is better informed,
[6] thus enjoying more advice than outside campus.
[7] Besides, a lot of educational facilities are at hand on campus and the accommodation fee is much lower than the monthly rent.
[8] Certainly, if you rent a well-furnished room, you may live more comfortably and freely, but you ate often lonely and insecure for lack of companions.
[9] Worse still, you may sometimes abuse your freedom and even commit crimes.
[10] As is often said, every advantage has its disadvantage. Living outside campus
[11] is no exception. Dormitory life,
[12] though a bit undesirable, is precious to every college student.
[13] Therefore, I suggest those living outside campus move back to campus for a real college life.

解析 [1] 意思为“根据最近调查”,引用数据描述某种现象。类似表达法有according to a recent investigation,according to a recent study等。
[2] 意思为“他们认为”,利用插入成分使句型富有变化。
[3] 意思为“毋庸置疑”,强调某一事实。类似表达法有it is indisputable that,it is no doubt that, it cannot be denied that等。
[4] 意思为“远非”,否定词组,起强调作用。
[5] 用于说明利大于弊的句型。
[6] 意思为“因此”,后接现在分词,表示结果。
[7] 意思为“另外”,用于第二层次列举。类似表达法有also,meanwhile等。
[8] 意思为“当然”,强调某一事实。类似表达法有indeed,of course等。
[9] 意思为“更有甚者”,用于追加列举。类似表达法有furthermore,moreover,even worse等。
[10] 意思为“常言道”,引出一个大家认可的事实。
[11] 意思为“不例外”,起强调作用。
[12] 利用分句插入成分,使句型富有变化。
[13] 意思为“因此”,表示结果。类似表达法有so,as a result等。
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