Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying

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问题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 点明写信的目的并且对个人情况作介绍
2. 申请助学贷款的原因及数额
3. 你的还款打算

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答案                                       A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
                                                                                    June 23rd
Dear Sir/Madame,
    I am writing to apply for your bank loan to support my studies in the next two years. I am a sophomore in ×××University, majoring in Psychology. In the past one and a half years, I have been studying very hard and won the second prize scholarship, and because of my excellent organizing abilities, I was elected chairman of the Students Union of my department.
    The tuition fee, however, has become a burden for me and my family. My father is a laid-off worker and my mother has a meager salary. It is beyond their ability to finance me through the remaining years of education, so I decide to apply to your bank for a loan of 10,000 yuan to relieve their financial pressure. This amount of money will cover my tuition fees in the next two academic years.
    I will take some part-time jobs, such as being a tutor or a salesman after school and during the two vacations to support myself. I guarantee that I will repay the loan within one year after my graduation. I would be very much obliged if my application is granted.
                                                                                  Yours sincerely,
                                                                                          Li Ling

解析 本文为书信体,首先要注意格式正确,最应该注意的是语言简练、逻辑性强。本文第一段以I am writing to apply for...开门见山地表明了作者写信的意图,接着对自己的学校、专业、专业学习和其他能力作了基本的介绍。第二段however一词引出了作者现在所面临的困境,紧接着so一词引出了申请助学贷款的目的及具体金额。结尾段作者用I would be very much obliged if my application is granted.总结全文并提出了作者的期待。
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