For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the re

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "A smile is the shortest distance between two people." You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案     Smile Bridges the Gap Among People
    The saying "A smile is the shortest distance between two people" has been widely accepted throughout the world. However, the high pressure in modern society makes the relationship among people more and more distant.
    In my opinion, smile is a powerful antidote to this phenomenon, which can not only bridge the gap but also break down barriers among people. When you present a smile to others, you will gain favor and even their friendship. Such examples might be given easily. American celebrated "hotel king" Hilton required his staff to put a smile on their faces no matter whatever happened. Smile helped Hilton come through the difficulties. Moreover, it brought huge profits.
    Have you smiled today? If not, let’s smile together! It is deeply rooted in my mind that the world will be more harmonious if we always wear a smile on our faces.

解析     第一段:引用题目所给出的名言,指出虽然大家都知道,微笑是人与人之间最短的距离,但是当今社会的压力让人与人之间的关系越来越远。
    第二段:首句提出论点,微笑不仅能够缩短人与人之间的距离,还能打破隔阂;接下来列举希尔顿酒店员工微笑的例子来证明论点。
    第三段:采用设问句,提出倡议,号召大家微笑起来。
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