For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Workin

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Working Experience following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
    1.很多单位要求应届毕业生有一定的工作经验
    2.有人认为这样的要求不公平
    3.我的观点

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答案     Working Experience
    When it comes to working experience, people hold varying opinions . Most companies prefer graduates who have some kind of working experience. In their opinion , what the college students learn from books is theoretical. Besides , they believe that job seekers with working experience are more cooperative in teamwork.
    However, others , especially job seekers who have just graduated from university hold that it is unfair to them. For one thing , it is a pity for them not to have the chance to practice what they have learned to gain experience. For another , they maintain that the knowledge they have gained from the books and formal education enables them to learn about the things that most people have no opportunity to experience in their daily life.
    As far as I’m concerned , both of these two arguments are reasonable to some extent. Various ways can be adopted to settle the conflicts. From the perspective of the employers, they can try their hand at hiring fresh but adventurous graduates, absorbing new thinking patterns and working methods. As for the college students, they should take part in more social practice to gain practical experience.

解析     第一段提出很多用人单位要求求职者有一定的工作经验,因为他们认为大学生在学校学到的书本知识大都理论性很强,不一定适用于实践,而且有工作经验的通常更有合作精神。本段既有定语从句,又有名词性从句做主语,还有宾语从句,句式结构丰富。
    第二段表明很多人尤其是刚毕业的大学生认为这样对他们不公平,因为他们在大学校园里很少有机会获取工作经验,而且认为人们不一定能在实际生活中获得他们学到的一些知识。本段最后一句两个that从句连用,使句子富有层次感。
    第三段阐明自己的观点,即两者论述都有道理,关键是如何解决这个矛盾。一方面,公司尝试多给新毕业的大学生机会;另一方面,大学生也要多参加社会实践来积累工作经验。本段多处用到现在分词短语,结构对称。
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