For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of To Learn Inside or Outside the Classroom. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
    1. 课堂学习很重要
    2. 然而,有人认为课外可以学到更多的知识
    3. 我的看法

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答案     Learning in the classroom is often supposed to be passively listening to the teacher. Actually, learning in the classroom is of great importance. It is inside the classroom that knowledge and skills are acquired directly from books and teachers. Moreover, through face- to-face communication with teachers, students may be easily inspired and enlightened.
    However, some people lay much emphasis on learning outside the classroom, regarding classroom learning dispensable. They argue that one can get much more knowledge outside the classroom through various channels. For example, one can learn a lot with the help of the mass media, such as television, radio, newspapers, etc. Also, there are more opportunities outside the classroom to apply theories to practice. What’s more, since the outside world is changing rapidly, book knowledge is apt to be out of date while new things are springing up everyday outside the classroom.
    My viewpoint is that classroom study, though fundamental, is far from enough in the competitive society.  As a famous educator says, "we learn not at school, but in life." Education is not complete with graduation. It is, therefore, suggested that more educational opportunities be sought outside the classroom.

解析     开头段正面指出课堂学习的重要性,该段不宜用例证展开。
    中间段从反面论述课外为什么可以学到更多的知识,该段可以利用列举和举例等手段进行具体说明。
    结尾段在正反两方面分析的基础上提出自己的看法,该段不宜展开说明,以提出建议为好。
    Learning in the classroom is often supposed to be passively listening to the teacher. (用被动语态表示“人们通常认为”,句式灵活,表达地道)
    It is inside the classroom that knowledge and skills are acquired directly from books and teachers. (强调句型,增强说服力)
    However,some people lay much emphasis on learning outside the classroom, regarding classroom learning dispensable. (However承上启下,现在分词作伴随状语,体现句式变化)
    For example, one can learn a lot with the help of the mass media, such as television, radio,newspapers,etc.(通过举例具体说明)
    What’s more,since the outside world is changing rapidly,book knowledge is apt to be out of date while new things are springing up everyday outside the classroom. (巧妙运用what’s more进一步阐述观点,与前面的also呼应)
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