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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled on Col

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled on Col

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled on College Students’ Renting Houses Outside Campus.  You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
    1. 眼下大学生在外租房居住的现象十分普遍
    2．对比分析在外租房居住和住在学校宿舍的利弊
    3．我的看法
           on College Students’ Renting Houses Outside Campus
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答案     According to a recent survey, about 20 percent of college students now live in houses they rent outside campus and some students plan to join them. In these small kingdoms, they say, they can enjoy more freedom than on campus.
    It is undeniable that many dormitories are far from satisfactory because they are small, shabby, noisy, stuffy in summer and cold in winter. However, the merits of living on campus outweigh its demerits. By sharing a room with others, one learns how to understand and help each other. Through daily communication with roommates, one is better informed, thus enjoying more advice than when outside campus. Besides, a lot of educational facilities are at hand on campus and the accommodation fee is much lower than the monthly rent. Certainly, if you rent a well-furnished room, you may live more comfortably and freely, but you are often lonely and insecure for lack of companions. Worse still, you may sometimes abuse your freedom and even commit crimes.
    As is often said, every advantage has its disadvantage. Living outside campus is no exception. Dormitory life, though a bit undesirable, is precious to every college student. Therefore, I suggest those living outside campus move back to campus for a real college life.
解析     用词亮点：(1) 在第二段首句中，undeniable意思为“毋庸置疑的”，强调某一事实，相当于indisputable that， undoubted，no doubt等。(2) 第二段尾句中，Worse still意思为“更有甚者”，用于追加列举。类似表达法有 Furthermore，Moreover，Even worse等。
    句式亮点：(1) 第一段首句中“According to a recent survey，…”意思为“根据最近调查，……”，用于引用数据和描述某种现象。类似表达法有According to a recent investigation，According to a recent study等。
    (2) 第二段第二句中“the merits of…outweigh its demerits”是一个表示“……利大于弊”的结构。(3) 第二段第四句中thus意思为“因此”，后接现在分词，表示结果。(4) 第三段首句中“As is often said，…”意思为“常言道……”，引出一个大家认可的事实。(5) 第三段第二句中“…is no exception”意思为“……不例外”，起强调作用。(6) 第二段第三句中，though a bit undesirable意思为“虽然有些不尽如人意”，是一个插入成分。(7) 第二段尾句中，Therefore意思为“因此”，表示结果。类似表达法有So，As a result等。
    篇章亮点：(1) 第二段第二句利用however表示转折。(2) 第二段第五句中，Besides意思为“另外”，用于第二层次列举。类似表达法有Also，Meanwhile等。(3) 第二段倒数第二句中，Certainly意思为“当然”，强调某一事实，类似表达法有Indeed，of course等，在这里起到过渡的作用。
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