For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Using

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Using Electronic Dictionaries. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
    1. 很多学生在英语学习中使用电子词典
    2.使用电子词典的缺点
    3.我的建议
                     Using Electronic Dictionaries

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答案     As the enthusiasm of learning English continues to grow, an increasing number of students are fond of using electronic dictionaries instead of the traditional printed ones. Convenience is one possible reason and other important reasons may involve the large capacity and versatile functions of electronic dictionaries.
    However, constant use of electronic dictionaries may bang about negative effects. First, while an electronic dictionary has a satisfactory capacity, explanations in it are often too simple, which may, in some sense, lead to confusion and misunderstanding. Another negative effect is a lazy attitude towards language learning from too much dependence on electronic dictionaries. Teachers often complain that fewer and fewer students can enjoy the happiness which lies in the bitterness of consulting a big traditional dictionary for the details of a word.
    My suggestion is that an English learner should have a good and comprehensive traditional dictionary at hand and treat the electronic dictionary as a supplement, Also, students are recommended to buy a high-quality and multi-functional electronic dictionary if they can afford.

解析     用词亮点:(1) 在第一段首句中,enthusiasm意思为“热情”。类似表达法有fever等;此外,an increasing number of意思为“越来越多的”,相当于more and more。(2) 第二段首句中,bring about意思为“导致”,相当于lead to,contribute to,give rise to,result in等。(3) 第二段第二句中,in some sense意思为“从某种意义上讲”,用于委婉地陈述某种观点。类似表达法有in some way。
    句式亮点:(1) 在第一段首句中,“…is one possible reason and other important reasons may involve…”是一个很实用的列举结构。(2) 第三段首句中“My suggestion is that…”用于陈述我的建议。
    篇章亮点:(1) 第二段首句利用However笔锋一转,开始从反面分析“使用电子词典的缺点”。类似表达法有Nevertheless,Nonetheless,Unfortunately等。(2) 第二段首句之后使用了“First,…Another negative effect is…”表示列举的结构。(3) 第三段尾句中Also表示追加列举。
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