For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Imp

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Improving Students’ Network Morality. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
    1. 目前大学生网络首先问题日益严重
    2.这种问题带来的危害
    3.如何加强学生的网络道德教育

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答案             On Improving Students’ Network Morality
[1]The problem of college students’network morality is becoming more and more serious today,which does great harm to the development of their personality and mentality.[2]Therefore it is important to improve their network morality.
[3]There are some ways to improve students’network morality.[4]First,students should be taught to understand that their online activities bring not only self-experiences but also social responsibility.[5]Second,rules should be made to control the network environment so that students will not be exposed to various immoral information on the Internet.
[6]Finally,technical means are required to supervise students’online behaviors so that any immoral behavior can be duly punished.
[7]If the student understands the importance of keeping a high network morality,if the Internet environment is healthy.and if immoral network behavior is always duly punished.I’m sure students’network morality call be improved greatly.

解析 [1]指出“问题日益严重”,对学生的个性发展和精神造成“危害”。对应提纲中的第1点和第2点。
[2]点题,与标题呼应。
[3]承接上文,又是本段的主题句。用这样的句子,容易展开段落。
[4][5][6]First,Second和Finally引出三种措施,逻辑井然。注意三个方面各有侧重,相辅相成。
[5]be exposed to为亮点短语,表示“遭受,暴露于……”。
[7]是对中心段落即第2段的总结。用三个if重复提及的措施,使文章中心更加清晰。
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