For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled What Do Par

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled What Do Part-time Jobs Bring to Us. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
    1. 越来越都的大学生开始兼职
    2. 兼职给我们带来了什么

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答案                 What Do Part-time Jobs Bring to Us
    【1】At present a fashion of taking part-time jobs is striding on the broad. 【2】As the proverb goes, "Every coin has its two sides." 【3】There are both blessings and curses.
    【4】The advantages are as follows. 【5】First and foremost, 【6】taking a part-time job enables some students to deal with their financial problems and become financially independent. 【7】What’s more, pan-time jobs provide students with good opportunities 【8】to develop strong senses of communication and cooperation, and practice what they have learned in class, 【9】which will benefit their future career.【10】However, the disadvantageous side is【11】that part-time jobs consume too much time and efforts. 【12】Some college students are not mature enough to【13】count the cost and【14】strike a perfect balance between work and study.
    【15】In short, doing part-time jobs has its duality, and we should learn to balance the pros and cons.

解析     【1】用a fashion is striding on the broad引出话题,吸引读者注意力。
    【2】用谚语表明主题,新颖切题。
    【3】There are both blessings and curses.是典型的引出利弊兼而有之的句型。
    【4】【5】【7】分析优点,层次分明。
    【10】用However笔锋一转,开始论述缺点。从行文可以看出,优点居多,所以先行论述,所费笔墨也较多。
    【13】count the cost是“权衡得失”的地道表达。
    【14】strike a balance between...是表示“平衡两个事物”的表达法,常用的还有“strike a balance between work and rest(劳逸结合)”“strike a perfect balance between a healthy diet and exercises(健康饮食和运动完美结合)”等。
    【15】结尾段总结对利弊皆有事物的分析。
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