Look at the notes below. You will hear a woman leaving a message for a c

Look at the notes below.
You will hear a woman leaving a message for a colleague about his slides for a presentation.
You have 15 seconds to read through the notes.
[pause]
Now listen, and fill in the spaces.
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    Hello, John, it’s Christine. I’ve just looked through the revised slides for your presentation, and they’re now much better. I’ve got a couple of general comments.
    You thought there might be too many slides. I don’t think that’s a problem, though several would be improved if you replaced the statistics. A few words would be easier to take in.
    Then don’t the slides strike you as looking rather dull and predictable? The content is fine, but the design needs some variety. Maybe adding a few animations would help.
    And two quite specific points. Something seems to have gone wrong in slide three. The graph is fine, but I can’t make sense of the bar chart. It doesn’t bear any relation to what’s gone before, or after.
    And finally, I remember we discussed the grammar mistake you had in slide six, and you’ve dealt with that, but if you have another look, I’m sure you’ll notice the spelling error that’s crept in. OK, once you’ve dealt with that, it’ll be fine. Goodbye.