Microblog, as a newly emerged application, has swept over China, which serves

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问题    Microblog, as a newly emerged application, has swept over China, which serves as a convenient medium for the public to express opinions freely, share information and disclose the undesirable behavior such as corruption. On the other hand, it may be misused by some people to defame others and cause chaos in society. What do you think?
   Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
   Is Microblog a Blessing or a Curse?
   Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案    Is Microblog a Blessing or a Curse?
   Over the past few years,  our communication pattern has shifted primarily from face-to-face communication to online social networking, among which microblog is the latest fascinating development. While highly applauded by its faithful users, it also draws harsh criticism. Personally, I believe microblog benefits us enormously.
   Firstly, as a new means of expression, microblog serves as a convenient platform for ordinary people to give vent to their feelings and voice their opinions. Secondly, the width of information has been broadened, since the grassroots, instead of being passive information receivers, are now able to share what they observe in their surroundings and their comments on certain events. Thirdly, it intensifies scrutiny on the behavior of every member of the society, especially the government officials. The scandals of the Red Cross Society of China and many other officials are good examples. Admittedly, there are many problems with microblog, among which privacy is the major issue. Personal information, such as the whereabouts and occupations of users, revealed through microblog may cause troubles. Besides, when the dissemination of information speeds up via microblog, some people irresponsibly spread unfounded rumors, which leads to undeserved slanders and disastrous chaos in the victims’ lives.
   In spite of all the drawbacks, microblog’s status as a newly emerged medium cannot be challenged in a short time. What we need is better censorship to minimize its negative effects.

解析    开头部分
   开篇点明将要讨论的话题,指出微博这一新事物既赢得赞许又遭受批评,并提出自己的观点:微博使我们生活的方方面面受益。
   中间部分
   1)分别用Firstly,…Secondly,…和Thirdly,…等引出论述,介绍微博的三个优点:首先,方便人们表达思想、发泄情绪;其次,民众成为信息来源,拓宽了信息广度和深度;最后,加强对社会成员特别是政府官员的监督。
   2)用Admittedly,…语气一转,承认微博也有一定的缺陷:第一,个人信息容易被泄露;第二,信息传播速度加快,使得无根据谣言泛滥,无辜者被恶意中伤。
   结尾部分
   指出微博存在的必要性,并强调应通过更好的监管来避免其负面影响。
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