Recently a newspaper has reported that salaries for college students are equ

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问题     Recently a newspaper has reported that salaries for college students are equivalent to wages for migrant workers. Apparently this comparison is too simple and superficial. However, job-hunting is much more difficult for college students but may be easier for migrant workers. What’s your opinion?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    The Main Factors Influencing Salaries for College Graduates
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案     The Main Factors Influencing Salaries for College Graduates
    Recently, salaries for college graduates are very low, and there has been a heated argument about whether they should have high salaries. Some people are for it; however, others are against it. As for me, I think we should view this problem rationally. Salaries for college graduates depend on many factors, and the main factors come from themselves.
    First of all, most of graduates don’t master the professional skills. Most college students don’t learn professional knowledge diligently, and what they have done in university are focusing on passing various exams. Still, others are obsessed with surfing the Internet and seldom attend regular classes. Anyway, being unskilled in their speciality is the most important factor influencing their salaries. Secondly, many students overestimate themselves. Some college graduates think that they are superior to others and they always prefer higher salaries. But the fact is that they learn a lot of theoretical things while they cannot apply them well into practice. Finally, variety and limitation in majors have an effect on salaries. Different fields have different levels in salaries in a short term.
    In conclusion, three main factors influence college graduates’ salaries, including professional skills, self-evaluation and major, hence college graduates should treat their salaries much more rationally.

解析     本题是一个给定观点型题目。要求就影响大学毕业生薪水的主要因素展开探讨。既可以从大学生自身角度来分析主要因素,也可以从社会角度分析,还可以结合两方面来综合分析影响大学毕业生薪水的主要因素。
    思路1:从大学生自身来分析主要因素。
    影响大学生薪水的主要因素有:有的大学生在大学期间并没有真正掌握专业知识;大学生过于高估自己的能力,理论能力强,但实践能力差;性别因素也是主要因素之一。
    思路2:从社会大背景角度来分析主要因素。
    当代社会需要更多有实际经验的从业者,而大学生获得更多的是理论知识,无法将理论应用于实际工作中;另外经济危机导致很多中小企业面临破产,因此借由压低薪水降低运营成本。
    思路3:从大学生自身及社会背景两方面来阐述。
    结合大学生自身的条件及当代社会大背景两方面来综合阐述影响大学毕业生薪水的主要因素,而不是将责任归于一方。
    范文采用了思路1,着重从大学生自身来分析。
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