Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay ent

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问题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled A Letter to the Mayor. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1. 假如你是王玲,请你就社区附近建筑工地的污染问题给市长写一封信,内容应涉及污染情况、给居民带来的不便以及你的建议。

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答案                                                                               December 16, 2006
Dear Mr. Mayor,
    I am writing to you to complain about the construction sites in our city, which cause serious environmental problems, and affect the life of residents in neighbouring communities.
    My major concerns are the air pollution and the noise pollution. When the heavy industrial equipment is working, the air is always full of rising dust and sometimes even black smoke. This greatly degraded the quality of air. As people inhale dust particles and polluted air every day, their respiratory system is bound to be affected.
    The other problem is the restless noise. Some construction sites operate after 8 pm, when most people need a little rest. The noise is not necessarily thunderous, but nevertheless disturbing. For people who go to sleep early, the noise is definitely a nuisance. If this situation goes on, the citizens’ rights cannot be guaranteed.
    I think two measures could be taken to solve the problems. First, construction work is inevitably dusty and noisy, but local authorities can set up higher pollution control standard, and restrict the working hours. Second, if some sites violate the regulations, more severe punishment should be imposed on the people responsible.
    It is my sincere hope that the pollution problems caused by the building sites will be looked into and solved as soon as possible. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
                                                                           Yours sincerely,
                                                                              Wang Ling

解析 写作提示:考试中的应用文以书信为主,在写作时需要特别注意的是书信的格式以及语域。此题要求给市长写一封投诉信,语域比较正式。第一段开门见山,点明写信的目的。接下来可以从噪音、排污等方面简述建筑工地给居民带来的不便,但点不宜过多。最后在提出建议后可以再次点题,并结束全文。
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