1.在大学中,室友之间和睦相处很重要; 2.有些人认为相互体谅是和睦相处的重要途径; 3.你的观点。

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问题    1.在大学中,室友之间和睦相处很重要;
   2.有些人认为相互体谅是和睦相处的重要途径;
   3.你的观点。

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答案                                    Harmonious Dormitory Life
       Obviously, dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. [1] To keep a harmonious relationship in the dormitory is really important for college students.
     [2] Some students think that the best way to keep a harmonious relationship is to be considerate. [3] For one thing, consideration for others is an effective solution to conflicts in life, because being considerate means being careful not to bring inconvenience to others. [4] So when enjoying chatting with friends on the phone, we should avoid  speaking too loud and disturbing those who are studying or having a rest. [5] For another, consideration for others is a bridge for friendship. [6] With consideration, we can stand in others’ shoes to deal with problems, which is the precondition of friendship.
    [7] I’m in favor of the above opinion. Apart from mutual consideration, we should also respect our roommates, treat them equally and kindly. Harmonious dormitory life brings us a sense of comfort and it pays to maintain a harmonious dormitory relationship.

解析    [1] 点题,指出和谐的宿舍关系对大学生来说非常重要。
   [2] 提出某些人的观点。
   [3] [5] 用For one thing…For another…列举理由,说明相互体谅是和睦相处的重要途径。
   [4] 通过举例,使观点更有说服力。
   [6] stand in others’ shoes为语言亮点,意为“站在他人的立场”。
   [7] 提出“我”的观点,并对全文予以总结。
   [写作指南]
   根据题目所给的提纲,这篇作文结构如下:
   第一段阐明宿舍里的和谐关系对大学生来说十分重要;
   第二段提出有些人认为相互体谅是和睦相处的重要途径,并予以分析:一方面相互体谅是解决冲突的有效方法;另一方面相互体贴是建立友谊的桥梁;
   第三段提出“我”的观点:赞同上述说法,并进一步指出室友之间还应相互尊重,平等对待。
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