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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Wa

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Wa

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Ways of Spending Summer Vacation. You should write at least 150 words based on the chart and the outline given below:
   
    1．简单描述图表内容
    2．分析变化的原因
    3．总结这种变化的趋势或影响
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答案     From the two charts, we can see that in the past ten years the number of college students who go traveling and do part-time jobs during summer vacations has increased greatly while that of those who stay at home has decreased a lot.
    We can see from the statistics that the percentage of college students staying at home during their summer vacation decreases from 55% to 32%, while the percentage of those doing part-time jobs increases from 9% to 28%. This means that students today are expected and encouraged to learn more about the real world. In this way they can obtain the experience required for job-hunting after graduation. In addition, the figures also tell us that the number of students traveling on summer vacation has a 14% increase. From it we can see that college students become more aware of the importance of broadening their vision through traveling.
    Judging from the figures, we can predict that more and more college students will make their summer vacations interesting and worthwhile by entering the outside world instead of staying at home.
解析     第一段概括指出大学生暑假出游和做兼职工作的人数呈上升趋势，而暑假待在家里的人数大幅下降。本段虽然只有一句话，但在并列结构中使用了相同的定语从句结构，且形成语义的对比，使得句式整齐，一目了然。
    第二段具体分析两个图表对照后的明显差异，分别从两个方面分析数据并解释其原因。首先，暑假选择待在家里的大学生人数急剧下降，而做兼职工作的人数大幅度增加，原因在于现在大学生需要了解社会，增加社会经验。其次，选择出游的人数上涨，这说明学生们认识到通过旅行增长见识的重要性。这两个方面用In addition连接，过渡自然。
    第三段在分析数据和原因的基础上进行预测：今后暑假中，越来越多的学生会走出家门，了解外面的世界。
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