For this part, you are allowed SO minutes to write a short essay entitled Starti

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问题 For this part, you are allowed SO minutes to write a short essay entitled Starting a Career in a Big City or in a Small Town? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.很多大学生毕业后留在大城市工作
    2.也有人选择到小城镇开始自己的职业生涯
    3.我的想法

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答案     Starting a Career in a Big City or in a Small Town?
    Along with the social advances, people are attaching more importance to the place where they start their career. They regard it as a crucial choice to make in life.
    Should we start our career in a big city or a small town? Some prefer the big cities with the following reasons. To begin with, big cities mean more opportunities to see the fabulous world and more space for career development. What’s more, higher salary and better living conditions in big cities are also inviting.
    While other graduates choose to start in small towns, where they can enjoy a quieter and less competitive life. Another reason is that they can be a big fish in a little pond, which means they can easily get the manager’s attention and may win promotion earlier.
    For my part, I prefer to start in a big city. As the saying goes, well begun is half done. Working in a big city, I have the chance to find a job in a world-famous company and thus get a better staring point in my career life. Most importantly, I can also learn a lot from various ambitious people who are determined to strive for their dreams.

解析     第一段提出最近引起人们关注的话题,即大学毕业生就业去向的问题。
    第二段阐述大学毕业生选择在大城市就业的原因,主要有:大城市意味着更多了解世界的机会和更广阔的职业发展空间;大城市的薪酬水平和更好的生活条件也具有强大的吸引力。
    第三段阐述为什么有些人选择在小城镇就业和生活,主要原因有生活压力小,在公司更有竞争力,容易得到升迁等。第二句中的a big fish in a little pond运用了比喻的修辞手法,为文章的一大亮点。此外,本句句末为which引导的非限制性定语从句,补充说明前面的情况;该定语从句中还套用了一个省略了引导词that的宾语从句,作means的宾语。
    最后一段提出自己的观点:宁愿选择在大城市打拼。第二句中使用谚语well begun is halfdone,使得论证更为充分有力。第三句句首使用现在分词短语作状语,使得句子简练,结构性强。
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