For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Sh

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Students Attend Physical Exercise? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given belo
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1.有人认为大学生应该参加体育锻炼
2.另一人认为大学生没有必要参加体育锻炼
3.我的看法
                    Should Students Attend Physical Exercise?

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答案                     Should Students Attend Physical Exercise?
    Nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among college students as to whether they should attend physical exercise. Opinions on this issue vary from student to student.
    Those who are in favor of attending physical exercise maintain that college students can benefit a lot from it. First of all, attending physical exercise can help students build a strong body and keep abounding energy. Moreover, physical exercise is an effective way to relieve pressure and keep a pleasant mood. Besides, by attending physical activities, students can have chances to communicate with others, which can help them improve their social skills. However, some college students do not like to attend sports activities. They argue that physical exercise is not a necessary part of college life. In their opinion, those activities can do nothing but waste their time.
    As far as I’m concerned, I prefer the former idea. Indeed, it is very unwise of college students to keep distance from physical exercise because physical exercise can do good to us. To conclude, physical exercise is beneficial to every college student, and therefore do not hesitate to attend physical activities.

解析 ①开门见山,引出关于大学生是否应该参加锻炼这一问题的争论。
②首先点出有人支持大学生参加体育锻炼。
③从三个方面论证支持的理由,使用First of all,Moreover和Besides列举理由,层次清晰。
④用However过渡到相反的观点,有人不支持参加锻炼,并列举理由。
⑤使用As far as I’m concerned结构,将文章自然过渡到自己的观点。⑥使用To conclude对该问题进行总结,呼吁大学生积极参加体育锻炼。
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