For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled St

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Styles of Living. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.有些人愿意和父母居住在一起
2.有些人想自己独立居住
3.我的看法
                        Styles of Living

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答案                         Styles of Living
    Some people enjoy living together with their parents after they have grown up. They hold that they can take care of their parents better when living with them. Meanwhile, they can turn to their parents for help if they get into trouble or have some difficulties.
    Others, however, prefer to live on their own. They cherish the idea of being independent of their parents, seeking more freedom and wishing to have a place of their own, in which they can do whatever they like. Besides, they don’t want to be overprotected by their parents but long for a chance to face the society by themselves.
    As for me, I like an independent lifestyle in spite of the fact that I love my parents. Living separately, each generation can enjoy their own life. In addition, by leading an independent life, I can develop my ability to deal with things encountered in my life.

解析 ①Some people enjoy…与第二段首句的Others,however,prefer to…形成对照,使两段能很好地衔接与呼应。
②hold与④中的cherish呼应,用词丰富。
③Meanwhile引出支持与父母同住的人的第二个理由。
⑤用Besides引出反对与父母同住的人的另一个理由。
⑥As for me转而阐述自己的观点与看法。
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