For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Man Pr

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Man Proposes, God Disposes. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
    1. 怎样理解“谋事在人,成事在天”
    2.举例说明
    3.结论
                Man proposes, God Disposes

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答案     There is a widespread proverb, "Man Proposes, God Disposes", which means that the planning lies with man, the outcome with God. This proverb indicates a relation between success and luck, that is, we should make constant efforts to achieve our goal, although in many cases the final outcome may be decided by luck.
    Take English study for instance. A student spends much time and energy on English and has good study habits. He is supposed to receive good grades in the examination. But suppose something unexpected, like illness occurs, and his final score is far from ideal, should he lose heart and become pessimistic? of course not. Just keep it up and next time luck will most probably favor him.
    To sum up, while luck does influence or even dominate us sometimes, we should never give up halfway, convinced that our hard work will pay in the long rum We are the master of our own fortune, so don’t depend any more on luck.

解析     用词亮点:(1) 在第一段尾句中,constant意思为“持续的”,在这里相当于persistent。(2) 第二段第四句中, far from意思为“远非”,表示否定。
    句式亮点:(1) 在第一段首句是一个引出谚语的结构。类似表达法有As an old saying goes,As a proverb says等。(2) 在第一段第二句中,“This proverb indicates”用于解释谚语的含义。类似indicates的有 implies。(3) 在第一段尾句中,that is意思为“也就是说”,用于补充说明,相当于that is to say,in other words等。(4) 第二段第一句中使用了“Take…for instance”表示举例的结构。(5) 第三段尾句中s。意思为“因此”,用于表示结果。
    篇章亮点:(1) 第二段倒数第二、三句利用一问一答的方法强调某种观点或事实。(2) 第三段首句中To sum up意思为“总之”,用于表示结论。类似表达法有In conclusion,To conclude等。
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