For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should sta

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of longing for a better life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案     Continuous Transcendence
    This picture symbolically reflects our psychological longing for a better life. Sometimes, we are just like the little boy at the bottom of the valley, with too many dreams. We always want to possess more, to behave better, and to climb to a higher level in the social ladder.
    Indeed, we need to be motivated by the hope of continuous transcendence. First and foremost, it is a natural law that society itself is making continuous progress. That means, if we do not try to transcend ourselves but stay at the original place, we will fall behind sooner or later. Besides, continuous transcendence can make our life more meaningful and colorful and set a good example for our friends and our offspring. What’s more, as life is short, we should make full use of our time to get a comprehensive development.
    In conclusion , we have many reasons to stick to the principle of continuous transcendence in the course of our life. We should try our best to improve ourselves, so that we will not be regretful for the past time in the future.

解析     这篇文章讲的是一个朴素的人生哲理:人们需要不断超越自己。文章第一段就上图进行了简单的介绍。末句使用三个不定式结构构成排比句式,增强文章的表达力。
    第二段详细论证了我们为什么要不断超越自己,从三个角度指出了不断超越自己的必要性和重要性。第一个原因:社会在不断进步,如果我们停留在原来的位置,早晚我们会落后于社会的发展。第二个原因:不断地超越自己会使生活变得更加有意义、更丰富多彩,这也为我们的朋友和后代树立了良好的榜样。第三个原因:我们应该充分利用时间来获得成长。
    第三部分总结全文。
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