For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on th

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of people’s practice of forwarding best wishes messages and then express your views on this practice. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案                 Better Compose Your Own Best Wishes Messages
    As is depicted in the picture, the husband is checking with his wife to find out whether she has forwarded the best wishes messages to all their friends and relatives. This couple is for sure not alone. In fact, in recent years it has become a common practice to forward best wishes messages whether through SMS, microblog or WeChat during festivals.
    Some people like forwarding the blessing messages that receive from others to mass because it is convenient. Others argue that the wishes sent in this way are not sincere enough and I agree with this view. On the one hand, a personalized blessing message means that you are willing to take the time to organize your words and express your special wishes to a friend, while a forwarded one may show that you are taking it just as a duty. On the other hand, a self-made blessing message, however plain, contains your most genuine wishes, while a forwarded one, however well-written, is borrowed and lacks warmth.
    So when next festival comes, let’s compose our own best wishes messages to our friends and relatives.

解析     这篇看图作文要求考生结合图片就“转发祝福短信”这种现象展开讨论并发表自己的见解。根据题目要求,文章结构可安排如下:
    第一段简要描述图片内容,指出近年来很多人逢年过节喜欢转发祝福短信。
    第二段提出自己关于这种现象的看法。
    第三段自然得出结论,总结全文。范文用一个祈使句发起号召,是个不错的呼吁句式。
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