For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a clas

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问题    For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案    A Classmate Who Has Influenced Me Most in College
   Once upon a time, I was not so confident about my study and was subject to being pessimistic when confronted with frustrations. However, I found myself gradually changing, as Tom, one of my classmates in college, strove to encourage me. I really appreciate his help.
   I used not to be good at English, however, whenever I was confused about the teacher’s explanation, he always interpreted it to me in an explicit way. Gradually, I found English not so difficult and made progress day by day. In addition, it was Tom who kept guiding me how to live through all kinds of setbacks and frustrations in life. I’ll never forget the very day when I failed my speech contest and was overwhelmed and ashamed. Tom told me that nobody can defeat a person if he is determined to stand up to every failure. With his encouragement, I regained confidence in learning, realizing that optimism was always the key to success.
   Thanks to Tom, I eventually learned the significance of self-confidence and optimism. They not only serve as indispensable characteristics of personality but also will benefit people all his life.

解析    首先应直接或间接地引出主题,指明这位同学改变了你。然后通过具体事例阐释该同学对你产生重大影响的原因。最后做出总结,升华主题。
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