For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should sta

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the problem of undue early education. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案     On Undue Early Education
    From this picture, we can see that an egg is sitting in front of a blackboard with a pair of thick glasses, and a hen is teaching it very complex and difficult mathematics, expecting it to become knowledgeable and versatile at an early age. This picture actually mirrors a common phenomenon in most Chinese families. The parents have always imposed a heavy burden on the shoulders of their children. However, undue early education may just have adverse effects.
    To begin with, early education has deprived the children of their happy childhood. Secondly, according to scientific researches, too early exploitation of children’s mind may hinder children’s natural development. Last but not least, improper and heavy burden of early education may make children get tired of future study in school.
    In short, I am strongly opposed to undue early education and I hope that parents and educational authorities help to reduce the educational task that fell on children. Let us make joint efforts to give a colorful and happy childhood back to our children.

解析     这是一篇关于社会热点现象的文章,作者在第一段对所给图片进行了简单准确的分析并引出主题:过度早教。紧接着,作者阐明了自己的观点,没有必要进行过多的早教。
    第二段给出了详细而又充满说服力的论据。第一,早教剥夺了孩子们的快乐童年;第二,过早开发孩子的思维会影响孩子的发展;第三,早教中不合适及繁重的负担会让孩子对未来的学校学习感到厌倦。
    第三段通过号召广大父母和教育机构减轻孩子负担来总结全文。
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