For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Im

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Perseverance by commenting on the famous saying, " Great works are performed not by strength, but by perseverance." You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案     The Importance of Perseverance
    As the (anions saying goes, "Great works are performed not by strength, but by perseverance." Perseverance is one of the essential qualities that enable people to make great achievements.
    Many famous people in history had attributed their breakthroughs to perseverance. For instance, American author Helen Keller lost her sight and hearing after contracting an illness when she was only two-years old, but her perseverance ultimately made her one of America’s greatest writers. To give another example, Beethoven also lost his hearing. Nevertheless, he never gave up, and continued to compose music. His perseverance was finally rewarded with many admired works.
    As college students, we should learn to cultivate perseverance as it is a positive attitude towards life which is of great benefit to our future development. We should always keep in our minds that strength is the king of the body but perseverance rules human souls.

解析     作者在第一段引出谚语:完成伟大的事业不在于体力,而在于坚忍不拔的毅力。接着说明坚持不懈是一种良好的品质。
    第二段以海伦?凯勒和贝多芬为例说明坚持不懈的重要性。her perseverance ultimatelymade her one of America’s greatest writers和His perseverance was finally rewarded with manyadmired works.说明了坚持不懈这种品质给他们带来的成就。
    第三段针对大学生提出自己的建议。
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