For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Mak

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Making Mistakes by commenting on the saying, "Man errs as long as he strives." You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案     On Making Mistakes
    As humans, we do make mistakes from the very beginning of our life. Even we keep learning all the time, we make mistakes because to err is human. It is acceptable to make mistakes. As the saying goes, "Man errs as long as he strives."
    In most cases, mistakes and progress go hand in hand. It is by correcting the mistakes we have made that we keep progressing. Many famous scientists, Nobel, Franklin, and Einstein, to name only a few, had made mistakes in their experiments, but they learned from their mistakes and finally made great inventions. Moreover, mistakes contribute to the development of society to some extent in that people may learn from others’ mistakes and avoid making the same mistakes. And thus the whole society will make progress.
    To sum up, we young people should be well aware that it is acceptable for people to make mistakes. When we strive for our dreams, we do make mistakes. But more importantly, we should learn from our mistakes and make progress.

解析     第一段引出名言“人只要奋斗就会犯错误”,由此确定本文的主题是:人非圣贤,孰能无过。
    第二段首句便指出,大多数情况下,错误和进步是密切相关的。接着通过诺贝尔、富兰克林、爱因斯坦这些例子指出,只有纠正错误才能取得进步。而且,人们可以从其他人犯的错误中吸取教训,避免犯相同的错误。从这个角度来说,犯错有利于社会的发展。
    第三段总结全文,重申主题。
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