The modernization program for the steel mill will cost approximately 51 million

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问题 The modernization program for the steel mill will cost approximately 51 million dollars, which it is hoped can be completed in the late 1980’s.

选项 A、The modernization program for the steel mill will cost approximately 51 million dollars, which it is hoped can be completed in the late 1980’s.
B、The modernization program for the steel mill, hopefully completed in the late 1980’s, will cost approximately 51 million dollars.
C、Modernizing the steel mill, hopefully to be completed in the late 1980’s, will cost approximately 51 million dollars.
D、The program for modernization the steel mill, which can, it is hoped, be completed in the late 1980’s and cost approximately 51 million dollars.
E、Modernizing the steel mill, a program that can, it is hoped, be completed in the late 1980’s, will cost approximately 51 million dollars.

答案 E

解析 A有两个缺陷:(1)which指代不清,离其真正先行词program太远;(2)it is hoped在which从句中所作成分不清,若it是形式主语,后面就应补出一个由that引导的作主语的名词性从句,但该which从句中无that;若it is hoped作插入成分,则应在其前后用逗号隔开,同样在which从句中无逗号出现;B中:过去分词completed修饰program不妥,因为过去分词表“过去完成”,而显然此计划在说话时还未完成;C看似无太大问题,暂时留下;D中有三个缺陷:(1)全句中无谓语结构,cost与be completed均为which从句中的谓语成分,句子不完整;(2)让人产生误解:be completed和cost共用一个助动词can,且不说并列的形式不妥,cancost的逻辑搭配也有问题;(3)it is hoped作为插入成分,修饰整个which从句,也就是它不仅修饰be completed,也修饰cost,即为“有希望地花去”,这个逻辑搭配同样有问题;E看起来没有问题,再对比C、E,初步的感觉是E中的逗号太多,句子结构显得较复杂,很多考生可能就会因此选C而放弃E,而答案恰恰相反,why?因为C的结构简化导致违背了“公理”中所提到的情态动词不能省的原则,即它省去关键词can。而E看似复杂,其实结构极清晰,aprogram是对主语的同位解释,it is hoped作插入成分。
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