In a few months’ time you are going to graduate from university. How do you

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问题     In a few months’ time you are going to graduate from university. How do you think your college years have prepared you for your future life? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic:
                               What I have learned from my years at university
    In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
    Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.

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答案                            What I have learned from my years at university?
    Before I went to university, it seemed to be such a holy place. As for me, it meant glory, respect, freedom, knowledge and a promising future. However, it was not until I ente

解析     本范文开门见山,在首段就点明主题:在四年大学生活中学到了很多东西,如勤奋、自控、友谊和合作。接下来,作者就以上四点分别进行论述:首先,大学里激烈的竞争和毕业后找工作的压力使我必须努力学习;其次,大学生活给了我自由,也教会了我自控的本领;再次,大学使我更深刻地领会到友谊的含义;最后,大学生活使我意识到合作的重要性。行文中使用了University is a highly competitive place, self-control is another thing that I have learned in university, university life makes me have a deeper understanding of friendship, last but not the least等表示启承转合的过渡句和短语,论述条理清晰。文章最后一段总结全文,重申主题,首尾呼应。全文一气呵成,结构严谨,用词规范,句式多变,是一篇优秀的范文。
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