Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. You are to suggest only ONE

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问题    Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. You are to suggest only ONE way to solve the problem.
   Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                                  One Way to Solve the Rubbish Problem
     You are to write in three parts.
     In the first part, state what your suggested way ix.
     In the second part, state one or two advantages of your suggestion.
     In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.  

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答案                                           One Way to Solve the Rubbish Problem
     The world is developing very fast, but it is faced with a very serious environment problem: the rubbish. Everyday, people are throwing away rubbish, and the increase in the amount has added up to a surprising level. To reduce the amount of rubbish, as I see it, government supervision is of essential importance.
     Evidence has shown that self-control is not sufficient for solving the rubbish problem. If governments take effective environment-oriented measures like putting taxes on packaging, providing recycling services and fining households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste, environment protection actions will be highly encouraged.
      In addition, government participation in environmental protection will set a good example for the general public and people’s awareness of the issue will be aroused. By publicizing the seriousness of the rubbish problem and the potential dangers it may bring to human beings, governments can make people fully convinced of the urgency d the problem and thus motivated to deal with it. Once people’s awareness is aroused, they will tend to produce less rubbish either in their daily life or in the industrial production, and then the problem will be solved in its root.
     To sum up, government plays an important role in dealing with the rubbish problem because with the political will and effective measures, not only the current production of rubbish will be controlled, but also people’s attitude towards rubbish and environmental protection will be changed, which will contribute to the ultimate solution to the problem.

解析    今天,人们生产制造出了越来越多的垃圾,环境受到了很大影响。题目要求考生提出一种解决垃圾问题的办法并进行说明,为典型的观点阐释型文章。
   分析提纲,可知文章在结构上应该是:第一部分给出背景知识并提出解决办法;第二部分从两个方面论证自己所提出办法的正确、合理性;第三段进行总结,重申自己的观点。不妨套用以下模版:
第一部分:引言
-背景+中心:背景一般为1-2个句子,采用描述情形的方式,可以是当前主要情形,或者当前情形+过去情形。在中心思想句中明确给出自己的建议、想法等。
-第二部分:主体
   本部分一般由2个自然段构成,每个自然段段首为段落主题句,对本段内容加以限制,即对中心思想中提出的建议、想法的原因加以解释说明(2-3个分论点)。
-从正面解释说明自己的观点。可以采取举例、因果、比较、对比等方式。
第三部分:结尾
-重申主题+展望前景:总结中心,同时展望建议或者想法实施后的前景。
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