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  3. In recent years, postponing the retirement age has become a hot topic that p

In recent years, postponing the retirement age has become a hot topic that p

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问题     In recent years, postponing the retirement age has become a hot topic that people talk about every day. Is it necessary to postpone the retirement age? The following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
    YES
    With the country’s pension fund gap becoming wider than ever, retirement age should be postponed immediately.
    Postponing the retirement age will benefit the companies which need highly-skilled and experienced workers to perform certain tasks that are beyond the scope of younger workers. As for the old, postponing the retirement age is also beneficial to them. Because they can not only earn money to cover daily expenses, but also make their talents and skills recognized and valued.
    NO
    Postponing the retirement age will bring a lot of harm. One is the stress of unemployment. With the growing number of students graduating from school every year, it is more and more difficult for them to land a good job. If the retirement age is postponed, it will be even harder for them to find a job.
    Postponing the retirement age is not good news to the enterprises, either. Old workers are unable to fully concentrate on their work; therefore, the efficiency of enterprises will be greatly reduced.
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答案     To Postpone or Not To Postpone
    As China’s population ages, postponing the retirement age has been under heated debate. Supporters believe that having those highly skilled and experienced "old" labor force work longer will not only narrow the country’s pension fund gap, but also be beneficial to the companies in desperate need of their skills and experience. As for the workers, when their valuable skills are recognized, they will derive more pleasure from their prolonged working life. Meanwhile, opponents argue that old workers unable to concentrate on working will decrease the company’s efficiency and take new graduates’ jobs as well. I believe the retirement age should be postponed for the following reasons.
    To start with, the 21st century has seen an unprecedented aging population, which means there will be more elderly people above the age of 65. More elderly population may signal heavier economic stress on fewer young workers, and therefore getting those at the retirement age to work will drastically relieve them of their economic stress. What’s more, postponing the retirement age will benefit the companies which need highly-skilled and experienced workers to perform certain tasks that are beyond the scope of younger workers. As for the old, postponing the retirement age is also beneficial to them, for they can not only earn money to cover daily expenses, but also make their talents and skills recognized and valued.
    In conclusion, population aging raises the critical question for the whole society, and postponing retirement age is one of the effective measures to be adopted.
解析     本文主题鲜明，提供的材料是对是否推迟退休年龄做出讨论。首先总结正反方的意见，然后给出个人观点。文章结构可安排如下：
    第一段：简要概括支持和反对推迟退休年龄的两方的观点，并提出自己的观点——支持推迟退休年龄。
    第二段：直击正方观点漏洞，分三点铺陈论证。首先，人口老龄化严重，过多的退休老人对年轻人来说是沉重的压力；其次，有些任务年轻人不能完成，企业更需要有经验，有技术的老年人；第三，老年人老有所为，更能体现自己的价值，得到社会的认同。
    第三段：总结全文，重申观点——推迟退休是解决人口老龄化的办法之一。
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