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Man-made beauty is a new word that appeared in recent years. Many people, mos

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问题    Man-made beauty is a new word that appeared in recent years. Many people, mostly young girls, beautify themselves by various operations. How do you comment on this phenomenon?
   Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
   My View on Man-made Beauty
   Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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答案    My View on Man-made Beauty
   The desire for a beautiful appearance is one of human natures. The plastic surgery may really mean something to some people. At least they become more beautiful. But every coin has two sides, and so does the man-made beauty practice for the following reasons.
   Firstly, one’s appearance is God’s blessing. After breast enlargement surgery, many women look sexier than before. However, many of them are also diagnosed with mammary gland disease. The more serious problem is that they risk being unable to breast-feed. Secondly, advocating such a practice will mislead people to false judgment of true beauty. The concept of beauty is quite rich in its content. It should include many virtues like honesty, diligence, etc. ,which should be the real mainstream of our aesthetic taste. The practice of man-made beauty will confuse those who are to develop a correct concept of beauty.
   Concerning the above possible harm the practice may bring about, I am strongly against it and advocate true and natural beauty. Besides, people, especially women, should pay more attention to the cultivation of their inner beauty since the inner beauty outweighs the external beauty in the long run.
解析    开头部分
   首先指出爱美是人的天性。接着话锋一转，指出整容也有负面影响。
   中间部分
   1)用Firstly，…和Secondly，…引出整容给一个人带来的负面影响。
   2)一些专业术语的使用显示了作者平时广泛的阅读面，考生也应注意词汇的积累。
   结尾部分
   1)用Concerning the above possible harm…承接上文，总结论点，权衡利弊，得出结论。
   2)用Besides，…提出呼吁：应该注重内在美。
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