For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Importa

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Importance of Competition by commenting on the famous remark, "survival of the fittest." You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.

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答案     Competition is the key word in "The Law of the Jungle". Just as the famous saying goes, "survival of the fittest": those who survive in the nature are invariably the winners in the competition. Likewise, in the human world, competition is also important for both individuals and the society as a whole.
    First of all, competition is a powerful force to urge people to excel themselves. If, in a sport game, two or more persons are in a competition, athletes have to bring their A game to outplay the opponent. If, unfortunately, one loses the game, he must set his heart and mind to get better to win the next competition. In this way, the athletes are driven to improve themselves. Secondly, competition is a catalyst to boost innovation. For example, in the Silicon Valley, many new technological applications are released on a daily basis. No company could afford to slacken and relax in their innovative undertaking. Subject to the competitive industry environment, they have to come up with new, distinctive and unique idea to survive.
    In conclusion, competition is important for us in that it makes us get better and brings us countless innovations.

解析 这是一篇观点阐释型的作文,要求考生对“竞争的重要性”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
第l段:从丛林法则入题,指出竞争对于个人和社会都同样重要。
第2段:阐述原因。
1.指出竞争是人们不断超越自我的动力,以运动员比赛来说明该观点。
2.竞争是创新的催化剂,以硅谷创新为例子。
第3段:重申观点,竞争能让我们超越自我,让我们不断推陈出新。
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