For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.有人做好事期望得到回报
    2.有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报
    3.我的观点

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答案     Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?
    A great many people expect a reward when doing a good deed. First and foremost, some people incline to equate good deeds with a certain amount of material rewards. What is more, they maintain that since the basis of contemporary society is money, getting rewards by performing good deeds can be one method of earning money.
    On the contrary, the vast majority of people assume that doing good deeds should be based on people’s individual consciousness of responsibility. Hence, doing a good deed is one way of fulfilling oneself and should have nothing to do with monetary rewards.
    In my opinion, it is imperative for us to do good deeds without expecting any rewards. For one thing, we should appeal to the authorities to legislate to encourage people to do good deeds. For another, we should cultivate people’s awareness that doing good deeds is extremely crucial to ourselves. We do this for enjoyment, self-fulfillment and spiritual enhancement, rather than for rewards.

解析     第一段指出一些人认为做好事应该得到回报,并阐述理由。末句为主句加宾语从句形式,从句主语为动名词短语getting rewards by performing good deeds。同时,该从句中又包含since引导的原因状语从句,使整个句子条理分明,层次感强。
    第二段提出相反的观点,即做好事不应贪图回报,并加以论证。段首使用短语On thecontrary承接上段,引起下文,使得文章结构清晰,过渡自然。
    第三段提出自己的看法,号召大家做好事不求回报,并进一步阐述了相关部门应该采取措施鼓励做好事的人,并注意培养人们乐于助人的意识。
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