For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: S

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Slimness. You should write no less than 120 words and your composition should be based on the following information:
现在“瘦身”很流行。请你谈一谈“瘦身”一词的含义和人们喜欢它的原因以及如何去瘦身。

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答案                               Slimness
    "Slimness" is a new word which appears in our daily life. It is different from the traditional words "Weight Control" which just means to cut down or lose the unnecessary fat. Apart from this, slimness goes further. It also means to reshape your beautiful body and selfimage which can make you more selfconfident and suitable to the society.
    Why do people like to slim now? Firstly, they have realized that fatness is harmful to health because it can cause diseases such as heart attack and high blood pressure or even the stroke. Secondly, overweight may spoil their image, especially for some young girls. They think they will not be loved by handsome boys. Thirdly, a goodlooking figure can not only attract people but make you feel more selfconfident than ever before.
    There are many ways for you lo slim. For example, you can take a proper diet which requires eating less fat and more vegetables. Another way is exercises such as riding horse or swimming. They all work very well.

解析     本文是一篇根据情景提示展开的说明文。
    本文针对题目指令中的情景提示,首先解释“瘦身”一词的含义,“瘦身”和“减肥”有所不同,它不只是减去多余的脂肪,而且还意味着重塑美丽的身材和使自己更自信的自我形象。
    在第二段,作者分析了人们热衷于瘦身的原因。首先,肥胖对健康有害,会导致像心脏病、高血压和中风之类的疾病;第二,超重会有损形象,特别是对一些年轻女孩,她们会觉得太胖不会被帅男孩喜欢;第三,好看的身材不仅可吸引别人,而且可使自己感到更自信。
    在第三段作者介绍了如何去瘦身的可行方法:少吃脂肪多吃蔬菜,参加体育运动等。
    本文作者把自己对主题的理解阐述得很清楚,让人信服。
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