For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My Vie

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on Best Wishes Text Messages. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
    1. 每逢节日都会有大量的祝福短信被转发
    2.有人认为转发祝福短信显得不真挚,有人不这样认为
    3.你的看法

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答案                  MY View on Best Wishes Text Messages
[1]On holidays many best wishes text messages are forwarded.[2]Some people like forwarding these text messages because it is convenient.The others say the wishes sent in this way are not sincere enough and I agree with this view.
[3]On the one hand,a text message made by yourself means that you are willing to take the time to organize your words and express your special wishes to a friend; while a forwarded one may show that you are taking it just as a duty.[4]On the other hand,a self-made text message contains what you exactly want to wish.Maybe it is not fancy,but it is special and unique.
[5]So when next holiday comes,let’s compose our own best wishes text messages to our families and friends.

解析 [1]指出现象,对应提纲中的第1点。短信、邮件等的“转发”用forward。
[2]用Some people...The others...分别说明人们对于转发祝福短信的不同看法,然后用and I...提出自己的观点。
[3][4]On the one hand...On the other hand...从两方面进行论证,条理清晰。
[4]contains what...使用了由what引导的宾语从句。fancy“新奇的;奇特的”正好准确表达了转发的祝福短信的特点:unique“独一无二的”是亮点词汇。
[5]compose“创作(文学、音乐等)”,此处指写短信,避免了与上文的made重复。
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