For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled What 3

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled What 3G Brings to the Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
    1.3G网络的建设和使用让手机又有了新的功能
    2.3G手机是否会快速进入校园
    3.面对日益更新的手机技术,在校生应该采取什么样的态度
                        What 3G Brings to the Campus

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答案                          What 3G Brings to the Campus
    With the employment of 3G networks by the telecommunication service providers, the functions of mobile phones are greatly enriched. Besides phone calls and messages, video calls, broadband Internet service and TV programs are also what 3G networks can offer.
    As the advocates of almost all the new inventions and technology, college students will surely welcome the coming of 3G networks. Putting the price of the phones and the monthly service fees aside, they will love the idea of holding a 3G phone in hand.     In my opinion, I really suggest they have a second thought. As students, we don’t have so many contacts to contact with and so much time to surf on the Internet. Watching TV is also a luxurious hobby since our time is so valuable. Science and technology will keep up the high speed of development and there’s no way that we can always be at the front. It will be very wise for us not to be always in fashion, but to choose what we do need.

解析      ①审题及布局。本文是一篇论说文【考频:10】。这篇提纲式作文要求学生首先对题目所提出的事件进行描述,给出自己在生活中的体会和观察,最后表明自己的观点。写作时注意句与句之间、段与段之间的逻辑关系,以增强论说文的说服力。在布局上,最好将文章分为三段。第一段简单叙述3G网络会为手机带来哪些新的功能;第二段阐明3G手机是否会对在校大学生产生影响,这种影响主要表现为积极方面还是消极方面;第三段是第二段的扩展,指出大学生应该如何应对。②语言。可以多使用一些结构相对复杂的句式,用词注意与文章整体风格一致,不要将正式的书面用语与口语化的短语和表达方式混用。就时态而言,因为多为讲述现在或将来的事实,采用一般现在时或将来时即可。
                     What 3G Brings to the Campus
     With the employment of______, ______are greatly enriched. Besides______.
    As the advocates of almost all the new inventions and technology, college students______. Putting______ aside, they will love the idea of______.
    In my opinion, I really suggest______. As students,______. ______ is also a luxurious hobby since______. Science and technology will keep up the high speed of______. It will be very wise for us not to______.
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