For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on How to Succeed in

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on How to Succeed in the Future Career. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
    1. 要在将来取得事业成功,因素很多,试举例说明
    2. 你的看法(说明理由)

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答案                       How to Succeed in the Future Career
    【1】Now people are making untiring endeavors for self realization in their careers. 【2】There are many factors for career success, such as higher education, sound mastery of foreign languages and computer knowledge, rich working experience and strong senses of cooperation.
    【3】Some people think higher education is of great importance. 【4】It is no denying that university education lays a solid foundation for one’s future success. 【5】Personally, I adopt an opposite opinion that other factors are more important.【6】First of all, abundant working experience will facilitate one’s ways of settling problems in the future career. 【7】 Moreover, people’s competences of communication and cooperation with others will 【8】make it easier for them to succeed in teamwork 【9】undoubtedly.【10】In a word, it is unwise to 【11】attach too much importance to education. It would be better if we 【12】strike a balance between IQ and EQ in preparation for the future career.

解析     【1】引出话题,用self-realization代替success,在开篇就用特殊的用词吸引了读者的眼球。
    【2】列举促成事业成功的因素。
    【3】先简要阐述某些人的极端观点。
    【4】用It is no denying先肯定这种观点中内含的道理。
    【5】用Personally引出作者相反的观点。
    【6】【7】分析原因,层次清晰。
    【8】用make it easier代替上文已出现的facilitate,体现用词的多样性。
    【10】在结尾段强调极端的观点和行为是不明智的。
    【12】提出明智的选择。
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