For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter of Congratulations.

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter of Congratulations. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline ( given in Chinese) below:
1. 你的一个朋友考取研究生,向他/她表示祝贺。
2. 他/她的成功给你的启示。
3. 邀请他/她来你校。

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答案                                                                        June, 26
Dear Zhang Ming,
    I have just heard the good news that you have been admitted to the Graduate School of Peking University. Congratulations! (l)
    Peking University is one of the top universities in the country, so I think the competition to enter the school must be fierce, but you finally achieved your dream. As a friend, I am so happy and so proud of you. I do appreciate your intelligence, work hard, determination and persistence. As you can know now, you have set a good example for me. I used not to have so much confidence in trying the best schools, but now, at least, your success gives me hope. So, I also would like to say "thank-you" to you along with "congratulations".
    By the way(2), if you can arrange the time, would you come to my school for a gathering? I think it will be great for us to celebrate this success together and most importantly, both of us need some relaxation!
    I am looking forward to your coming.(3)
                                                                 Sincerely yours,

解析     本文为贺信,应注意书信格式。另外,写信人和收信人是朋友关系,因此,注意语言和内容安排上要能体现这种“朋友关系”。
    1.I have just heard the good news that...Congratulations!为感谢信里常用表达。
    2.注意最后一段的内容安排,符合朋友间的表达习惯。By the way为口语常见表达,但此信写给朋友,感觉自然。
    3.结尾用“I am looking forward to”而没用“I look forward to”,也是因为两人的关系亲近决定的。Look forward to用在正式场合。
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