For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on th

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the statement "We can learn more from people at a higher level than us (like teachers) than from people who are at the same level as us." Do you agree or disagree? You can cite examples to illustrate your viewpoint. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案                         Learn from the Wise
    It is said that we can learn from people at a higher level than us, for example teachers, than those who are at the same level as us. I strongly believe that there is a point in such a statement.
    First, people at a higher level here do not refer to those of mere greater age, seniority or social status. It is the maturity of the soul that measures which kind of people we can learn from and rest upon. Take the story between Aristotle and Alexander the Great as an example. Overbearing as he was as a king, Alexander respected Aristotle, a pagan from another polis, as his teacher. By repeatedly seeking advice from Aristotle, he expanded the presence of his military forces even towards the Asian and African continents. It is the mental support from his teacher that realized his ambition.
    No one in the world can be perfect. And that is why we should learn from others, especially from those who are wiser, more insightful and more intelligent. Learning from them can make us better improve ourselves.

解析     此类题型属于典型的观点论述题。题目要求对“从水平比我们高的人那里学到的东西比从和我们同一水平的人那里学到的要多”这种观点给出考生自己的见解。考生需明确立场和观点,无论赞同与否只需言之有理即可。本范文从正面论述,对文章的结构安排如下:
    第一段:引出话题,并开门见山摆明观点:这种观点的合理性。
    第二段:首先对考题中的概念进行理清。什么叫做水平比我们高的人呢?是年龄、资历还是社会地位上的水平?都不是。只有首先陈述清楚水平比我们高的人的定义,才能抽茧剥丝,深化主题。援引例证从身份地位相差悬殊的亚里士多德和亚历山大着手,反面论述灵魂的成熟度、睿智度才是衡量可学习之人的标准。
    第三段:指出我们为什么需要向他人学习并向智者学习的益处,此为点题。
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