For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should sta

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案     Doing Big Things Starts From Doing the Small Ones
    As is vividly revealed in the picture, the boy expresses his worries about the disposal of nuclear wastes, while his father asks him to empty the dustbin in the room first. The picture reminds us of an old Chinese saying If you don’t like to do trivial things like cleaning your room, it’s impossible for you to undertake any important task.
    Undoubtedly, the symbolic meaning conveyed in the picture that it is vital and necessary to deal with trivial things should be given serious consideration. First, doing small things well may help us develop the good qualities needed in undertaking important tasks, which lays the foundations for our future development. More often these small things would make the difference between success and failure. We all know that the want of a horse shoe nail may cause a kingdom to be lost. Therefore, when it comes to the key to success. the most important thing lies in dealing with every trivial thing well around us.
    In a word, for college students, to achieve goals needs not only a great ambition, but also a spirit of dealing with trivial things from the beginning. Only in this way can we achieve great success.

解析     第一段简要描写图片的内容:父子之间的对话。首句使用As is vividly revealed in the picture句型引入父子之间对话的内容。接着,第二句引用谚语If you don’t like to do trivial things likecleaning your room,it’s impossible for you to undertake any important task,进一步说明图片所隐含的内容。
    第二段揭示图片的深刻含义,并进行论证。第一句便揭示了图片的深刻含义,即努力做好小事可以培养做大事所需要的优良品质。其中,lay the foundations for和make the differencebetween…and…均为高分表达。
    第三段首句使用In a word总结全文,并提出正确的做法。末句使用Only in this way引导的倒装结构,强调主题。考生也可以使用其他的高分句式总结全文,如All in all,only those whohave the patience to do simple things perfectly will acquire the skills to deal with tough things.
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