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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on success and persistence. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.

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答案　　In the picture, two miners are featured: the one on the top is digging his way into a mine, full of diamonds; the one in the bottom is gloomily giving up his efforts, just few inches away from the treasure.
The message implied in this picture is about the secret to success: persistence. Had the man in the bottom persist in his efforts a little bit longer, he would be able to claim the enormous wealth.
What’s true of the miner is also true of most people. When most people encounter challenges, they feel helpless and quit trying right after the first few attempts. In fact, they may be close to success and what they need is perseverance, the quality of never giving up. Take J. K. Rowling as an example. She was very poor when she was composing Harry Potter, but she did not give up. Her persistence finally rewards her with fame and wealth.
In conclusion, we must persist in our efforts when we are on our way to success.

解析这是一篇看图作文。图片中是一组对比图，上下分别是两个矿工。一个正在往钻石矿里面挖，另一个却在离成功近在咫尺的地方放弃了挖掘。根据这一分析，并结合题目要求，全文可以安排如下：
第一段描绘图片信息：上面的矿工正在挖掘一条通道，逐渐靠近满是钻石的矿床，而下面的矿工却在距离宝藏几尺之遥的地方放弃了努力。
第二段指出图片的意图：向读者传递“成功之道贵在坚持”的道理。
第三段阐述关于“成功与坚持”这个话题的看法。
第四段总结全文。

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