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问题 China witnesses great success in economical development after its adoption of the policy of reform and openness to the outside world. But the economical prosperity, at the same time, brings about the overwhelming appearance of fake commodities causing enormous economical loss. Write an essay about 400 words, expressing your view on fake commodities.
In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion with a summary.
You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
Write your composition on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.

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答案 Combat Fake Goods
Now, we live in a society with sufficient goods, all kind of products jamming the cabinets of shops and markets. Millions of consumers, with brilliant faces full of smile on, rush out from stores with bags of foods, clothing, etc. At home, however, inside the dedicate pack they find the food taste bad, the clothing’ s color fade, which make them upset and depressed. There is a humorous story, which describes, such a situation vividly: a person who wants to kill himself survives, because the poisonous liquid he drinks is fraudulent, too. So, we should combat false goods.
Now, more and more citizens called for movements to prevent fakes from being distributed. But it is too ridiculous to see such a conflictive vision: on one hand consumers expect the shops not to sell fakes, an the other hand they hunt for the cheapest goods with beautiful appearance without paying enough attention to the quality. Now that consumers "need" fakes, sellers provide what they need, what is more critical, which simultaneously can bring more ramp to them. And so do the manufactures. It is the link and soft management of administration that produce the flood of fakes.
But fakes are the things that mismatch such a civilized world So what should we do? Firstly I think consumers should promote their capability of judgment. Secondly sellers should restrict themselves not to distribute the goods from those factories with no qualified certificates. Thirdly, manufactures should regulate their products. But the key three points is to strengthen legislation and law enforcing, to make all the citizens besides officials and manufacturers have a sense of producing and distributing qualified goods, and to pay more attention to future profit than to current. Only with these measures taken we can succeed in combating fake goods.

解析 “打击水货”这个作文题很有新意，并且考生在自己的生活中都能感受到它的重要性，所以写起来不会太难。但八级作文并非叙事文，而是一种议论性质的文章，所以自己的经历不能全部搬到文章中来，而是要把握好自己客观评述打击水货的能力。
在第一段中，首先要给出论点，是反对打击水货，还是坚决支持打击水货呢? 这个思考应该很快，因为很少有人会支持水货，所以观点要提出来。
在第二段中，作者重点分析水货给人们生活带来的种种不便，以及打击水货的必要性，其实相当于一个问题，但可以一环套一环，逻辑清楚，深入浅出，让人信服。考生可以把自己的经历升华到较大的方面来考虑，这样才有议论文的气势。
在第三段中作者在前二段的基础上进一步阐述水货所引起的不良后果，然后小结全文。

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